Pretty Nice!!
I don't know why you're scored so low, I think it's an excellent ambience piece.
Your style of writing is similar to modern classical compositions, or impressionistic/romantic era composers, so I understand most people won't just 'get it' when presented plainly, but I think you did a very effective job of conveying a thought of a far off land.
Perhaps a bit of the piano clashes with itself compositionally, but not too much. Rarely, every now and then with the strings, but it feels as if you've been pretty careful about it.
Over all, It's a very effective bit of music.
P.S., the beggining, you used Absynth, am I correct?